Thursday, February 22, 2007

Storytime

About 20 minutes after she was already supposed to be in bed, our older daughter informed us that she still hadn't finished her mystery story that was due the next day. Thinking she only had to type it, we let her stay up to finish it. 30 minutes later, she informed us that it couldn't be longer than 500 words, and her current story was 625. No problem, right? Just needed a little editing, right? We could help her with that, right? *ahem* Then we read the story for the first time. Oh. My. It was supposed to be a mystery. She had decided her main character was going to be kidnapped and taken through a black hole into a dungeon. Oooookkkkk. But she neglected to explain the black hole thing in her already too long story. Ouch. So now it's an hour past her bedtime, and guess who gets the "editing" responsibility? Except it's not so much editing as re-writing. Heaven forbid she would have worked on it or talked to us about it last week when she was off of school most of the week. So at 10:00 at night, I'm furiously re-writing her story while trying not to rewrite her story. At least I got rid of the black hole of suck (my not to affection name for her plot devise). Thank heavens her grade isn't totally dependent on this one.

2 comments:

Jynx said...

LOL! Wow, you deserve an award for your 10pm efforts, mom!

I forget how old your eldest is, but isn't she still pretty young? It's not like the teacher could be extremely picky, right? RIGHT?!?!?!?

At least she/you got it done and turned in. How do you think it turned out? Any chance we can get a peek? =)

hftr said...

Sarah's in 3rd grade. Her writing is ... interesting. I guess it's not bad given the circumstances, but I really wish I could have worked with her on it. She doesn't understand quite how to add detail to her story. It would have been better if I could have let her struggle a bit with it rather than resorting to mad editing skillz. I'll have to see if I can get a copy of it.